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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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One thing that might be improved is the lower left - the hologram screen/computerthingy looks surprisingly unsharp compared to the others, but otherwise this picture is fantastic.
And that robot in the front looks like Alpha from Power Rangers.
I like the colors but I wish you pushed the orange glow a bit more for a bit more contrast especially on the closer up panels to the left. I love the reflected light and wouldn't mind seeing that pushed a bit more too, not to the extent of it being super obvious but maybe just a slight intensity increase...
The only other thing I can think of is that the floor and ceiling kind of confuse my eye. The ceiling looks like it goes further than the floor but it looks like it's supposed to not go further than the floor. So I guess decide if you want the environment to be deeper or shorter and then match one or the other to whatever you choose. I'd like to see a deeper feel so try extending the floor a bit further back or giving it a slightly higher and smaller cut off point. Hopefully I'm making sense, it's been a while.
Either way I think there's a lot of great stuff in here and it's another piece I'd like to put on my wall to keep the monster print you gave me company. Hope I helped you out some, I'm glad you're still making art. You're improving every time i see something new.
was trying to make a cyberpunk city thing but it became this instead. -_-;;
although the normandy SR1's innards are the same color XD
i definately need to rework the perspective..
i wanted to keep it close to the thumb as possible but i guess it wonked up the perspective. =T
damn thing is always the stuff i have trouble with when painting stuff like this.
guess that means i need to make this stuff work before painting it in.
thanks for the crit! it's always to great to hear them